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did you watch the stars, my darling?


did you watch the stars, my darling?
they are from a fairy sea
which whispers on the very verge
of immortality-
let’s go there and see!

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3 thoughts on “did you watch the stars, my darling?

  1. a lovely poem , well done

  2. adarkstormynight on said:

    I really liked the first four lines!
    but i didn’t like the last line, I found it broke the flow and feeling/tone of the poem and I didn’t like the use of the homophone see…

    • sparrowsong on said:

      Haha yes! I actually don’t like this poem, either. I wrote it when I was much younger but decided to put it here along with the others to record the differences in my writing. 🙂

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