Catch Some Wide Eye

Perspective is Everything


you want freedom
a dumb and dying dog
i know you aren’t
worthy
i know you are
evil
you purposefully avoid anything remotely-

[hope turns everything around]

you purposefully avoid anything remotely-
evil
i know you are
worthy
i know you aren’t
a dumb and dying dog
you want freedom

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6 thoughts on “Perspective is Everything

  1. sparrowsong on said:

    I rarely apologize for my work, even when my poems really piss people off. But I’m gonna say right now this is definitely not my best piece. I was just experimenting with the retrograde-with-opposite-meaning idea which I’ve come across once or twice before. Some people are really mind-blowingly amazing at this stuff, so I figured I might as well give it a shot.

    I totally bet you could do better, though. You should try it! 🙂

  2. There’s plenty of crap poetry in the blog-o-sphere, but this is really interesting and well made. It has a real and subtle idea in it too. BTW Hope is dope, but it sure can make a difference in perspective as u so elegantly show here. -Waldow, AKA The Lying Lion

  3. The message and the means well thought out. I like it.

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