the tilt of your hilt is solid wood
I can tell by your smell, you are no good
and the scent of disaster
moves fast but not faster
than the blow that lands on my hood
Oh…this does not sound like a good run-in…hope all is well.
Thanks for the concern! I’m a member of the Society for Creative Anachronisms, so this was an attempt to capture a fighter practice session. Of course, I had to add the “no good” angle to build some tension in this poem, but in reality we’re all good friends. ^^
Very visual. Good job. Could you take a look at my work?
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I am for an art that has the power to knock your socks off. I am for poetry that already has. Author, musician, educator, scatter brain. Proudly serving the global community since 1984.